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Post by Tsuruko on Jun 28, 2006 23:53:09 GMT -5
Hell ya!!!
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Post by Shakujou on Jun 28, 2006 23:54:31 GMT -5
^______^
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Post by Tsuruko on Jun 28, 2006 23:56:15 GMT -5
I'll start the rest tomorrow.
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Post by Shakujou on Jun 28, 2006 23:56:43 GMT -5
Okay, good luck. ^^
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Post by Tsuruko on Jun 28, 2006 23:57:23 GMT -5
Thanks. ^_^
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Post by Tsuruko on Jul 5, 2006 16:23:59 GMT -5
Chapter 9: Nekos Part one
They followed Sakura for miles. They wondered what would be in store for them. Little did they know the village that they were going to run into would show the true nature of their world. They would learn of a species they had never heard or even dreamed of. "We've been walking FOREVER Sakura!" Rai complained. "We're here." Sakura stated The village was big, so many people. "Wow, it's like everyone on the entire planet is here." "You've never seen this many people?" "NEVER!" There were so many people Rai almost got lost. Moments later they looked back and Sakura was gone! "So you made it, Sakura." Kanaye laughed. "Yes, is everything ready--" Just then Akira appeared. "What the hella re you doing here?!" Kanaye yelled "I'm here to kill Sakura." "Why me?" "Because it's my orders." "Who exactly are you working for?" "It doesn't matter all that matters is you die." Akira then pulled out a knife and looked Kanaye deep in the eyes. The ground rose and wrapped around Kanaye's legs making her unable to move. "H-Hey let me go!" Kanaye yelled. "So you want a fight?" Sakura snapped, "I am the powers of the gods! A mere spirit in a human's body can't possible hurt me." "I am not just any spirit, I am the spirit of all elements. Don't take me lightly,princess." "Don't take us lightly either, Akira! We have the Goddess Mariesa on our side!" Kanaya laughed as she broke the ground surrounding her feet. "Kanaye stay out of this!" "Why?" "I don't want to fight you! Not...not infront of our daughter!" "Daug...hter...?" "Yes, I bring her everywhere with me, so I can look after her." Kanaye slapped Akira across the face. "Mo..mommy?" Kanaye looked at Nani. It tore her apart seeing her child. "D-Daddy said I would be able to meet you here...I always wanted to see you...for real...I love you, m-mo....mommy." Kanaye glared at Nani and Akira. "Get her out of my face." Kanaye then grabbed Sakura's hand and walked away. "Mommy! Mommy wait! Don't...leave!" ~~~
"Are all present?" "Yes." "Now....ATTACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Suddenly thses cat eared beasts attacked the village that Shiratori and his group were in. The beasts killed innocent people, chopped off children's heads and laughed as the women screamed as they cut them in half. "What's going on?" Shiratori asked himself. "There must be an attack!" Miyoko answered. "Should we check it out?" Rai asked. "I don't know.." Shiratori asked unsure. "We should, people are getting attacked!"Miyoko raised her voice. "I hope Sakura didn't get attacked...Alright, lets go!" The heroes ran into the crowd pushing their way through. As they finally got to the center of the village they could see the cat eared people killing the humans.They looked for a leader. Shiratori saw one on a horse, he showed no emotion. Their eyes met. his deep cold eyes sent shivers down Shiratori's spine. He could feel it, this was the man that had to be controlling the other cat men. "Look at the man on the horse, he must be the leader." Shiratori whispered. But before Shiratori could say anymore Rai was already throwing his ninja stars at the leader. "YOU BASTARDS HOW DAR YOU KILL INNOCENT PEOPLE?!!!" But this leader was far more experienced in the laws of battle tha Rai would ever be. He turned his head slightly as the stars passed his head and hit one of his team members in the head, killing him. The man hopped off the horse and started walking to Rai. Rai looked into his gold eyes, the face of fear. He couldn't even move an inch. "You have guts, ninja boy....but not skill." he said as he got closer. Rai gulped, speachless. Suddenly Miyoko jumped in and pulled out her dagger. The soldiers grouped to protect their leader. In a flash blood sprayed from their necks as they collapsed to the ground. The dagger dripped with blood as Miyoko ran twards the leader. He didn't even pull out a weapon. She swung the dagger at him. As it reached his face he grabbed it by the blade with his two fingers and threw Miyoko against a wall, then throwing the dagger at her, hitting her in the arm. He looked at Shiratori. "You are the Goddess Mariesa are you not?" "Goddess Mariesa? I have no idea what you're talking about!" "I can feel it." He said pulling out his sword. "I will make you bleed. And prove you have her blood within your viens."
((until part two!))
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Post by Shakujou on Jul 5, 2006 16:29:07 GMT -5
The leader sounds pretty strong.
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Post by Tsuruko on Jul 6, 2006 3:12:37 GMT -5
He's somewhat strong, but the enemy's coming up I'll try to make even stronger.
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Post by Tsuruko on Jul 6, 2006 3:34:15 GMT -5
Chapter: 10 Nekos Part Two Newest Character! : Hiniko! Job: General of the Neko military Age: 23 Sex: Male Race: Half-Neko Family: None Weapons: Sword Height: 186 Cm Weight: 70 Kg ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The wind blew past them as Miyoko and Rai watched. Shiratori clenched the sword on his belt. It was his first actual fight, he was scared. He saw how many lives were taken by his army and how quickly Miyoko, the strongest in her village, had fallen at his hands. At the same time he was furious at him for doing such a thing to his friends. ((will continue))
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Post by Shakujou on Jul 6, 2006 12:42:54 GMT -5
Pictures really do help.
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Post by Tsuruko on Jul 6, 2006 21:04:03 GMT -5
Chapter: 10 Nekos Part Two
The wind blew past them as Miyoko and Rai watched. Shiratori clenched the sword on his belt. It was his first actual fight, he was scared. He saw how many lives were taken by his army and how quickly Miyoko, the strongest in her village, had fallen at his hands. At the same time he was furious at him for doing such a thing to his friends. "Who.....and..what are you?!!" Shiratori desperately asked. "I am Hiniko I am a Neko. Have you not heard of us? We have been in war with you humans for fifty years." "Fifty years?! I..I have never heard of nekos before." "Such an ignorant human. No matter, I will finish you here and now." Hiniko raised his swords at Shiratori. Shiratori knew he had to win or else. He too took out his sword. They fell into their stances and then the real fighting began. The sound of swords clashing filled the area,the sound of grinding dirt beneath their feet, and the short breaths beneath their tongues as they dodged eachother. "You fight well for a human!" "I'm just getting started!" Shiratori swung his sword, the blade eating into Hiniko's skin as his blood stained Shiratori's sword. Hiniko yelled in pain as he held his lower stomach. He looked finished. Hiniko hunched over in pain. As he rose back up he began to laugh. "That was a swift attack, I didn't even see it coming." He then got back in a stance. "But I won't be beat by a human!" Soon after he had said that he collapsed. His soldiers ran to his aid. "We'll be back for your head! And for payback we'll take this girl as prisoner!'' one soldier shouted as they took Miyoko away. "No Let me go!" Miyoko shouted. "LET HER GO YOU BASTARDS!" Rai screamed. ''LET MIYOKO GO!" Shiratori shouted as well. ~~~~~~~~~ "Akira, you must kill Sakura." a dark haired man said "I know.." "We must all kill Sakura,Kanaye, and especially Jinshii. We are the only ones who can do it,us Shinigami." Sheela said. ~~~~~~~~~ "The Shinigami are after us." Kayaye said. "Who are the Shinigami?" "It's an orginization that got together to destroy Jinshii. We have no idea who their leader is, or how many people are in with them." "I see and Akira is one of them?" "It's obvious.
((will continue))
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Post by Shakujou on Jul 6, 2006 21:08:43 GMT -5
You really have an interesting plot going on here. ^ ^
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Post by Tsuruko on Jul 7, 2006 13:08:40 GMT -5
Not really I feel I'm rushing my ideas too much.
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Post by Shakujou on Jul 7, 2006 13:12:55 GMT -5
Hmm, that happens sometimes, but I never made a story with my own original characters before.
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Post by Tsuruko on Jul 7, 2006 13:23:58 GMT -5
This is my first time. ^^;;
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